Review of Past Habitual by Alf Machlochlainn

Since one of the stories in Past Habitual has the word topology in the title (a rather surreal story about dental cleaning and a meditation about M and W’s and dental hygienists’ bosoms), I feel justified in using topology to describe my feelings of Past Habitual by Alf Machlochlainn.

Yay math!

Let’s take the earth. I’m going to assume that most of you agree the earth is round. But locally, it doesn’t feel round. It, generally, feels pretty flat wherever one is standing. The curvature of the earth is so massive compared to a teensy-tiny person that it can feel mind-boggling that really, we’re on a big (almost) sphere when it really seems, in our perspective, to be a flat plane. Such is it with my enjoyment of Past Habitual: give me a page of the book and I’ll like it. I’ll like the writing. I’ll like the words. I’ll like the way each page pulls you right into Ireland, one of my favourite places to read about, with its complex history and shifting loyalties. But pull back far enough and I’m like “What the f*ck is going on?” because the stories tend to jump, these massive, unprepared, leaps of logic and time and characters and style and I just don’t know. I do not know how to describe it other than baffling. Globally, in respect to Past Habitual, I spent a fair deal of time being baffled.

As for style, there’s a lot of almost stream-of-consciousness, memory. The ones focusing on Ireland’s past could all be linked, all told from the same characters one may suppose. Themes reappear: the Irish War of Independence and Civil War of the 1920s, Germans coming to Ireland during the Second World War, the Catholic Church, sentences here and there in Irish. The book doesn’t explain Ireland for the non-Irish. I don’t mind that. I like the narrator’s voice most of the time — not so much when he offers to kill the kittens, but most of the time. It’s rural without being idyllic. Most of it feels true, at least, as I’ve said, locally. Globally? Incomprehensible.

Past Habitual by Alf Machlochlainn went on sale April 13, 2015.

I received a copy free from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.